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		<title>By: Daniel</title>
		<link>http://asciidan.com/2010/04/journalists-must-write-for-people-not-search-engines/comment-page-1/#comment-163</link>
		<dc:creator>Daniel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Apr 2010 14:42:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Brian. The search part of this argument has gotten all the ink, but the part that burned me most was about ensuring the use of keywords to properly match advertising. That just can&#039;t be a journalist&#039;s place.

I&#039;m not arguing that journalists shouldn&#039;t write clear, informative headlines...that&#039;s a straw man Josh set up. I&#039;m arguing that journalists shouldn&#039;t be in the business of selling newspapers or placing advertising, and that&#039;s what the article I responded to suggests. Can you sell tickets to someone in Indiana? Theoretically. Will you? No. Not enough to warrant the effort.

If a story is about Fayetteville, should Fayetteville be mentioned in the story? Of course it should. Not because a search engine won&#039;t pick it up, but because it&#039;s good journalism. Do it because it&#039;s good journalism. If it&#039;s good for a search engine, so be it. But I think the intent is important. There are a million things you can do to trick a search engine to get crappy content to the top of the results. As journalists, let&#039;s concentrate on the million things we can do to serve our communities the best we can.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Brian. The search part of this argument has gotten all the ink, but the part that burned me most was about ensuring the use of keywords to properly match advertising. That just can&#8217;t be a journalist&#8217;s place.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m not arguing that journalists shouldn&#8217;t write clear, informative headlines&#8230;that&#8217;s a straw man Josh set up. I&#8217;m arguing that journalists shouldn&#8217;t be in the business of selling newspapers or placing advertising, and that&#8217;s what the article I responded to suggests. Can you sell tickets to someone in Indiana? Theoretically. Will you? No. Not enough to warrant the effort.</p>
<p>If a story is about Fayetteville, should Fayetteville be mentioned in the story? Of course it should. Not because a search engine won&#8217;t pick it up, but because it&#8217;s good journalism. Do it because it&#8217;s good journalism. If it&#8217;s good for a search engine, so be it. But I think the intent is important. There are a million things you can do to trick a search engine to get crappy content to the top of the results. As journalists, let&#8217;s concentrate on the million things we can do to serve our communities the best we can.</p>
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		<title>By: Daniel</title>
		<link>http://asciidan.com/2010/04/journalists-must-write-for-people-not-search-engines/comment-page-1/#comment-162</link>
		<dc:creator>Daniel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Apr 2010 14:32:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for coming by and taking the time to comment, Frank. To be clear, I didn&#039;t set up this dichotomy; Mr. Niles did that. A well-written article will include the who, what, when, where, why and how anyway...so if this is all we&#039;re talking about, why do we need to talk about it at all? The reason is because Mr. Niles suggests writers use keywords to make pages more lucrative. That&#039;s appalling. A writer should not spend his time wondering what ads Google might put alongside his story. 

For the second part of your comment...I&#039;m specifically talking about newspaper websites here. The vast majority of American journalists are working for local news organizations. I do think different rules apply to national and international organizations, but I believe those cases, advertising is way more important than SEO. I can tell you precisely how many times I&#039;ve searched for something and returned to a site time and time again: zero. If your site isn&#039;t a destination for me, reading one decent story there isn&#039;t going to change that.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for coming by and taking the time to comment, Frank. To be clear, I didn&#8217;t set up this dichotomy; Mr. Niles did that. A well-written article will include the who, what, when, where, why and how anyway&#8230;so if this is all we&#8217;re talking about, why do we need to talk about it at all? The reason is because Mr. Niles suggests writers use keywords to make pages more lucrative. That&#8217;s appalling. A writer should not spend his time wondering what ads Google might put alongside his story. </p>
<p>For the second part of your comment&#8230;I&#8217;m specifically talking about newspaper websites here. The vast majority of American journalists are working for local news organizations. I do think different rules apply to national and international organizations, but I believe those cases, advertising is way more important than SEO. I can tell you precisely how many times I&#8217;ve searched for something and returned to a site time and time again: zero. If your site isn&#8217;t a destination for me, reading one decent story there isn&#8217;t going to change that.</p>
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		<title>By: Brian Cubbison</title>
		<link>http://asciidan.com/2010/04/journalists-must-write-for-people-not-search-engines/comment-page-1/#comment-160</link>
		<dc:creator>Brian Cubbison</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Apr 2010 14:07:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I do think SEO principles sometimes come across as if they were made by engineers and numbers people instead of wordsmiths. We always tell the newsroom to use them sensibly and don&#039;t take them to extremes. And really, I can&#039;t think of any examples of a headline that was obviously written for SEO that failed for the reader. It&#039;s more often the other way around. A vague headline doesn&#039;t work for either.

As far as driving traffic goes, if someone from Indiana is searching for Syracuse basketball, you can advertise Syracuse tickets to them. Heck, you can advertise Indiana tickets to them. (But they won&#039;t find it if the headline says SU instead of Syracuse.)  But Dan is right, the prime business is loyal local customers for local businesses.

I&#039;ve just never seen SEO as all that different from what we want staffers to do anyway. Write an informative, to-the-point headline that gets people to read your story. SEO is just a different set of style points, and considering how arcane some newspaper style points are, it might actually be an improvement.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I do think SEO principles sometimes come across as if they were made by engineers and numbers people instead of wordsmiths. We always tell the newsroom to use them sensibly and don&#8217;t take them to extremes. And really, I can&#8217;t think of any examples of a headline that was obviously written for SEO that failed for the reader. It&#8217;s more often the other way around. A vague headline doesn&#8217;t work for either.</p>
<p>As far as driving traffic goes, if someone from Indiana is searching for Syracuse basketball, you can advertise Syracuse tickets to them. Heck, you can advertise Indiana tickets to them. (But they won&#8217;t find it if the headline says SU instead of Syracuse.)  But Dan is right, the prime business is loyal local customers for local businesses.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve just never seen SEO as all that different from what we want staffers to do anyway. Write an informative, to-the-point headline that gets people to read your story. SEO is just a different set of style points, and considering how arcane some newspaper style points are, it might actually be an improvement.</p>
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		<title>By: Daniel</title>
		<link>http://asciidan.com/2010/04/journalists-must-write-for-people-not-search-engines/comment-page-1/#comment-158</link>
		<dc:creator>Daniel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Apr 2010 13:55:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You right, Josh. Newspapers are in a death spiral. And this &quot;whatever they&#039;re doing&quot; to attract loyal readers isn&#039;t working. But what is this &quot;whatever?&quot; Our hometown paper is slimmer, the stories are poorly written and sourced, and there&#039;s still a huge reliance on wire copy from day to day. This is the big effort you&#039;re talking about? The one that leads to &quot;okay, now we&#039;d better &#039;optimize&#039; our stories to get more traffic...and stuff in a Burger King reference so a fast food ad will run with the story.&quot;? Seriously? 

You&#039;re also right that I&#039;m an idealist. &lt;a href=&quot;http://asciidan.com/2009/05/it-isnt-the-internet-really/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;As I wrote here&lt;/a&gt;, I left the industry precisely because the industry -- and the people in it -- don&#039;t recognize the privilege they have. And as such, they produce sub-standard content -- content that does not meet the needs of the community. &lt;em&gt;That&#039;s&lt;/em&gt; why there&#039;s a death spiral. &lt;em&gt;That&#039;s&lt;/em&gt; why people started turning to the Internet in the first place.

Your argument, by extension, means journalists should do whatever they can to ensure they can pay the bills. So why not buy your stories? Why not make them up entirely? If it sells paper or drives traffic, it works in Josh&#039;s vision of &quot;journalism,&quot; right? Well, not mine.

BTW, the lack of traffic isn&#039;t keeping newspapers from making money from online advertising. Just the idea that more traffic needs to be sent to newspaper websites is specious at best. The reason newspapers can&#039;t make money online is that they undervalued online ads from the beginning. To prop up the print ads, they sold against online ads...they made sure advertisers knew the value was in print and not online. Kinda hard to change your advertisers&#039; minds after you convinced them the first time.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You right, Josh. Newspapers are in a death spiral. And this &#8220;whatever they&#8217;re doing&#8221; to attract loyal readers isn&#8217;t working. But what is this &#8220;whatever?&#8221; Our hometown paper is slimmer, the stories are poorly written and sourced, and there&#8217;s still a huge reliance on wire copy from day to day. This is the big effort you&#8217;re talking about? The one that leads to &#8220;okay, now we&#8217;d better &#8216;optimize&#8217; our stories to get more traffic&#8230;and stuff in a Burger King reference so a fast food ad will run with the story.&#8221;? Seriously? </p>
<p>You&#8217;re also right that I&#8217;m an idealist. <a href="http://asciidan.com/2009/05/it-isnt-the-internet-really/" rel="nofollow">As I wrote here</a>, I left the industry precisely because the industry &#8212; and the people in it &#8212; don&#8217;t recognize the privilege they have. And as such, they produce sub-standard content &#8212; content that does not meet the needs of the community. <em>That&#8217;s</em> why there&#8217;s a death spiral. <em>That&#8217;s</em> why people started turning to the Internet in the first place.</p>
<p>Your argument, by extension, means journalists should do whatever they can to ensure they can pay the bills. So why not buy your stories? Why not make them up entirely? If it sells paper or drives traffic, it works in Josh&#8217;s vision of &#8220;journalism,&#8221; right? Well, not mine.</p>
<p>BTW, the lack of traffic isn&#8217;t keeping newspapers from making money from online advertising. Just the idea that more traffic needs to be sent to newspaper websites is specious at best. The reason newspapers can&#8217;t make money online is that they undervalued online ads from the beginning. To prop up the print ads, they sold against online ads&#8230;they made sure advertisers knew the value was in print and not online. Kinda hard to change your advertisers&#8217; minds after you convinced them the first time.</p>
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		<title>By: Frank</title>
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		<dc:creator>Frank</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Apr 2010 13:55:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dan, what you&#039;ve done here is create a dichotomy between SEO optimized articles and good journalism where none actually exists. Following the rules Josh mentioned earlier, giving up clever headlines and long, soft ledes, doesn&#039;t change the quality of the entire piece. It can still be a well-written, well-researched, informative article, and be completely SEO optimized. For a news site that is not location-specific like Slate, Salon, or HuffPo, all your arguments against artificially inflated advertising numbers go out the window because the site has no obvious local readership (syracuse readers going to syracuse.com) and must instead try to attract readers through marketing and discovery, a large part of which is search results. It must then depend on the quality of it&#039;s overall product to create loyalty and build readership. I can&#039;t tell you how many times I&#039;ve searched for something and ended up finding an extremely useful and informative website that I return to time and time again.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dan, what you&#8217;ve done here is create a dichotomy between SEO optimized articles and good journalism where none actually exists. Following the rules Josh mentioned earlier, giving up clever headlines and long, soft ledes, doesn&#8217;t change the quality of the entire piece. It can still be a well-written, well-researched, informative article, and be completely SEO optimized. For a news site that is not location-specific like Slate, Salon, or HuffPo, all your arguments against artificially inflated advertising numbers go out the window because the site has no obvious local readership (syracuse readers going to syracuse.com) and must instead try to attract readers through marketing and discovery, a large part of which is search results. It must then depend on the quality of it&#8217;s overall product to create loyalty and build readership. I can&#8217;t tell you how many times I&#8217;ve searched for something and ended up finding an extremely useful and informative website that I return to time and time again.</p>
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		<title>By: Josh</title>
		<link>http://asciidan.com/2010/04/journalists-must-write-for-people-not-search-engines/comment-page-1/#comment-147</link>
		<dc:creator>Josh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Apr 2010 12:31:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dan, you seem to be under the impression that news is separate from the delivery vehicle (let&#039;s say a newspaper). It&#039;s an ideal that, sad to say, I&#039;ve given up on. It would be great if journalism could thrive because it&#039;s good journalism. It can&#039;t. The marketing department has a product to sell, and when the product isn&#039;t selling, you need to refine the product to match the market.

Journalists are getting laid off and newspapers are closing. This isn&#039;t happening (for the most part) because they&#039;re not producing good journalism, it&#039;s happening because they&#039;re still trying to reach a market that no longer exists. The newspaper model hasn&#039;t changed in many years. Newspapers have simply cut size and changed their layout to try to maintain their bottom lines, and it&#039;s not working.

Newspapers can seek primarily loyal readers, but whatever they&#039;re doing isn&#039;t working. You can&#039;t keep the lights on and the presses running by appealing to a small group of loyal readers; you need to have a larger group of people buying, even if a large portion of that group is ephemeral.

One of the reasons it didn&#039;t matter to me that I was leaving the industry -- and I probably would have gone after the right offer anywhere -- is that I&#039;d come in with that change-the-world ideal that many young journalists have, and I gave up on newspapers being able to provide that and still be able to pay the bills. 

Brian C asked me in a Q&amp;A if I read the paper, and I answered as delicately as I could that no, I don&#039;t, because it doesn&#039;t give me enough. What I didn&#039;t say is I can&#039;t justify 75 cents and more paper to recycle for a 10-minute read. I would be one of those loyal readers if the market would support a product full of people being damned good at journalism. But at the moment, it doesn&#039;t.

No, I don&#039;t have &quot;proof&quot; that the AP adopted website for SEO. Their press release on the new edition said it was due to &quot;customer demand.&quot; I think it&#039;s reasonable to guess that SEO was one of a bunch of factors driving that customer demand. I&#039;m guessing in the next three to five years, we&#039;re going to see the AP move to postal abbreviations for states, as well. 

Ignoring the &quot;rules&quot; of the web, including SEO, is the offline equivalent of just dropping newspaper boxes everywhere and stocking them equally. But we don&#039;t do that. We put them in high-traffic areas where people are likely to buy them: outside of diners and convenience stores instead of in the middle of public parks and on the tops of trees in people&#039;s yards. The difference is, the rules of the web, for better or worse, include content in a way that offline marketing doesn&#039;t.

The problem many news organizations run into is that when they hire SEOs is that they hire SEOs with no usability experience and no news background, and then they listen to those SEOs blindly. Seriously, it makes me want to punch babies. And publishers.

The larger overall argument here -- and this is just a facet of it -- is, is it more important to produce good journalism, or for newspapers to be able to pay the bills? Because in the current climate, the first is not leading to the second.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dan, you seem to be under the impression that news is separate from the delivery vehicle (let&#8217;s say a newspaper). It&#8217;s an ideal that, sad to say, I&#8217;ve given up on. It would be great if journalism could thrive because it&#8217;s good journalism. It can&#8217;t. The marketing department has a product to sell, and when the product isn&#8217;t selling, you need to refine the product to match the market.</p>
<p>Journalists are getting laid off and newspapers are closing. This isn&#8217;t happening (for the most part) because they&#8217;re not producing good journalism, it&#8217;s happening because they&#8217;re still trying to reach a market that no longer exists. The newspaper model hasn&#8217;t changed in many years. Newspapers have simply cut size and changed their layout to try to maintain their bottom lines, and it&#8217;s not working.</p>
<p>Newspapers can seek primarily loyal readers, but whatever they&#8217;re doing isn&#8217;t working. You can&#8217;t keep the lights on and the presses running by appealing to a small group of loyal readers; you need to have a larger group of people buying, even if a large portion of that group is ephemeral.</p>
<p>One of the reasons it didn&#8217;t matter to me that I was leaving the industry &#8212; and I probably would have gone after the right offer anywhere &#8212; is that I&#8217;d come in with that change-the-world ideal that many young journalists have, and I gave up on newspapers being able to provide that and still be able to pay the bills. </p>
<p>Brian C asked me in a Q&amp;A if I read the paper, and I answered as delicately as I could that no, I don&#8217;t, because it doesn&#8217;t give me enough. What I didn&#8217;t say is I can&#8217;t justify 75 cents and more paper to recycle for a 10-minute read. I would be one of those loyal readers if the market would support a product full of people being damned good at journalism. But at the moment, it doesn&#8217;t.</p>
<p>No, I don&#8217;t have &#8220;proof&#8221; that the AP adopted website for SEO. Their press release on the new edition said it was due to &#8220;customer demand.&#8221; I think it&#8217;s reasonable to guess that SEO was one of a bunch of factors driving that customer demand. I&#8217;m guessing in the next three to five years, we&#8217;re going to see the AP move to postal abbreviations for states, as well. </p>
<p>Ignoring the &#8220;rules&#8221; of the web, including SEO, is the offline equivalent of just dropping newspaper boxes everywhere and stocking them equally. But we don&#8217;t do that. We put them in high-traffic areas where people are likely to buy them: outside of diners and convenience stores instead of in the middle of public parks and on the tops of trees in people&#8217;s yards. The difference is, the rules of the web, for better or worse, include content in a way that offline marketing doesn&#8217;t.</p>
<p>The problem many news organizations run into is that when they hire SEOs is that they hire SEOs with no usability experience and no news background, and then they listen to those SEOs blindly. Seriously, it makes me want to punch babies. And publishers.</p>
<p>The larger overall argument here &#8212; and this is just a facet of it &#8212; is, is it more important to produce good journalism, or for newspapers to be able to pay the bills? Because in the current climate, the first is not leading to the second.</p>
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		<title>By: Daniel</title>
		<link>http://asciidan.com/2010/04/journalists-must-write-for-people-not-search-engines/comment-page-1/#comment-144</link>
		<dc:creator>Daniel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 24 Apr 2010 16:49:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Form follows function, Josh. It&#039;s a pretty simple equation. Are you writing to inform people or drive traffic? Driving traffic is a function of the marketing department -- not journalists. It&#039;s extremely dangerous to put journalists in that position (as I showed in the blog post, it makes for bad, sometimes unethical, journalism). Once we start down that path, there&#039;s no turning back.

Secondly, what argument can you possibly put forth that one-time visits are good for anyone? They aren&#039;t good for advertisers and they are good for newspaper sites in the long term. They&#039;re bad for advertisers because (especially if they&#039;re out-of-towners) they artificially inflate numbers with visitors who won&#039;t buy local products anyway. And they&#039;ll hurt newspapers because they artificially inflate the expectations of advertisers. When they don&#039;t get results, they won&#039;t buy ads from you. That&#039;s just plain logic. Not only that, but I&#039;ve seen it in practice.

The SEO crowd loves numbers. I don&#039;t. I&#039;ve seen newspapers and websites fall all over themselves to get numbers for years now, and it hasn&#039;t helped. It&#039;s not numbers that count; it&#039;s loyalty. You don&#039;t get loyal readers by making marketers of your journalists. You don&#039;t get loyal readers by pandering to an algorithm. You get loyal readers by being damned good at what you do. 

Do you have any proof the AP adopted &quot;website&quot; for SEO purposes? Cuz I bet that&#039;s not it. AP recognizes the changing language. And I don&#039;t think Web site was ever the popular spelling.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Form follows function, Josh. It&#8217;s a pretty simple equation. Are you writing to inform people or drive traffic? Driving traffic is a function of the marketing department &#8212; not journalists. It&#8217;s extremely dangerous to put journalists in that position (as I showed in the blog post, it makes for bad, sometimes unethical, journalism). Once we start down that path, there&#8217;s no turning back.</p>
<p>Secondly, what argument can you possibly put forth that one-time visits are good for anyone? They aren&#8217;t good for advertisers and they are good for newspaper sites in the long term. They&#8217;re bad for advertisers because (especially if they&#8217;re out-of-towners) they artificially inflate numbers with visitors who won&#8217;t buy local products anyway. And they&#8217;ll hurt newspapers because they artificially inflate the expectations of advertisers. When they don&#8217;t get results, they won&#8217;t buy ads from you. That&#8217;s just plain logic. Not only that, but I&#8217;ve seen it in practice.</p>
<p>The SEO crowd loves numbers. I don&#8217;t. I&#8217;ve seen newspapers and websites fall all over themselves to get numbers for years now, and it hasn&#8217;t helped. It&#8217;s not numbers that count; it&#8217;s loyalty. You don&#8217;t get loyal readers by making marketers of your journalists. You don&#8217;t get loyal readers by pandering to an algorithm. You get loyal readers by being damned good at what you do. </p>
<p>Do you have any proof the AP adopted &#8220;website&#8221; for SEO purposes? Cuz I bet that&#8217;s not it. AP recognizes the changing language. And I don&#8217;t think Web site was ever the popular spelling.</p>
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		<title>By: Josh</title>
		<link>http://asciidan.com/2010/04/journalists-must-write-for-people-not-search-engines/comment-page-1/#comment-143</link>
		<dc:creator>Josh</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 24 Apr 2010 16:02:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Dan,

I guess I&#039;m just not clear on why journalists can only either learn AP Style or SEO writing. Seriously, people&#039;s brains are big enough for both, and really, good SEO writing is a couple of basic rules, until you get to the black hat trickery that you seem to think is all SEOs do. 

I think good SEO comes naturally to smart people without them even considering it. If you were writing this piece for a print paper, you may have used a headline like &quot;Journos, forget SEO&quot; to make it a two-column, single-deck hed. But you have space, and you spelled out journalists and search engines. Ta-da! SEO writing. When newspapers started on the web, they weren&#039;t doing that -- they were simply shoveling the print headline and print story to the site. Now they&#039;re recognizing the need for stuff like web-friendly headlines and findable copy.

And AP is recognizing that, too -- they recently made a change from Web site to website; the second is searched so much more frequently than the first.

The fact that fewer people are reading newspapers and the 1940s and days of 52% profit lines are gone, means there has to be some evolution in the industry. I&#039;m certain you and I are in agreement that what&#039;s important here is that journalists deliver strong news content in a manner that is readable and effective. I just find there is a need for pulling in one-time reader traffic to keep page views -- and, it follows, ad revenue -- up for the online side, and that&#039;s where using some basic SEO, like good headlines and ledes, comes in.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Dan,</p>
<p>I guess I&#8217;m just not clear on why journalists can only either learn AP Style or SEO writing. Seriously, people&#8217;s brains are big enough for both, and really, good SEO writing is a couple of basic rules, until you get to the black hat trickery that you seem to think is all SEOs do. </p>
<p>I think good SEO comes naturally to smart people without them even considering it. If you were writing this piece for a print paper, you may have used a headline like &#8220;Journos, forget SEO&#8221; to make it a two-column, single-deck hed. But you have space, and you spelled out journalists and search engines. Ta-da! SEO writing. When newspapers started on the web, they weren&#8217;t doing that &#8212; they were simply shoveling the print headline and print story to the site. Now they&#8217;re recognizing the need for stuff like web-friendly headlines and findable copy.</p>
<p>And AP is recognizing that, too &#8212; they recently made a change from Web site to website; the second is searched so much more frequently than the first.</p>
<p>The fact that fewer people are reading newspapers and the 1940s and days of 52% profit lines are gone, means there has to be some evolution in the industry. I&#8217;m certain you and I are in agreement that what&#8217;s important here is that journalists deliver strong news content in a manner that is readable and effective. I just find there is a need for pulling in one-time reader traffic to keep page views &#8212; and, it follows, ad revenue &#8212; up for the online side, and that&#8217;s where using some basic SEO, like good headlines and ledes, comes in.</p>
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		<title>By: Daniel</title>
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		<dc:creator>Daniel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Apr 2010 22:48:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for coming by, Brian. First, I&#039;ll say that I&#039;ve always hated the &quot;Tap man for post&quot; headlines. One of the things I love about The Onion is the way those headlines are ridiculed. And I think good headline writing isn&#039;t about SEO at all, but about being informative. Newspapers really lost their way on that years ago. I also agree that Google isn&#039;t well suited for directing people to news -- especially not local news. But studies show consistently that most people visit newspaper websites for local news. So why play to the search engines? If you&#039;re trying to get local people to visit your website, advertise. Make the site a destination by creating top-of-mind awareness. Make sure local people think of your site when they want to know what&#039;s happening.

Secondly, there&#039;s no argument you can offer that drive-by traffic has any worth at all -- especially on a local news website. Someone in Indiana who&#039;s brought to a news site in Syracuse to read about the plane landing on the Hudson is not helping you at all. In fact, it&#039;s probably hurting you, because it artificially inflates the number of potential customers your advertisers believe they&#039;re reaching on your site. 

I think you&#039;re absolutely right about the iPad and such. Branded apps will be transformative, and will make SEO even less important.

Yeah...I&#039;ve only had this domain for a year. Outside of the normal WordPress stuff that&#039;s built in, I don&#039;t do any SEO. But regardless what Google suggests, the results on the front page are all me.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for coming by, Brian. First, I&#8217;ll say that I&#8217;ve always hated the &#8220;Tap man for post&#8221; headlines. One of the things I love about The Onion is the way those headlines are ridiculed. And I think good headline writing isn&#8217;t about SEO at all, but about being informative. Newspapers really lost their way on that years ago. I also agree that Google isn&#8217;t well suited for directing people to news &#8212; especially not local news. But studies show consistently that most people visit newspaper websites for local news. So why play to the search engines? If you&#8217;re trying to get local people to visit your website, advertise. Make the site a destination by creating top-of-mind awareness. Make sure local people think of your site when they want to know what&#8217;s happening.</p>
<p>Secondly, there&#8217;s no argument you can offer that drive-by traffic has any worth at all &#8212; especially on a local news website. Someone in Indiana who&#8217;s brought to a news site in Syracuse to read about the plane landing on the Hudson is not helping you at all. In fact, it&#8217;s probably hurting you, because it artificially inflates the number of potential customers your advertisers believe they&#8217;re reaching on your site. </p>
<p>I think you&#8217;re absolutely right about the iPad and such. Branded apps will be transformative, and will make SEO even less important.</p>
<p>Yeah&#8230;I&#8217;ve only had this domain for a year. Outside of the normal WordPress stuff that&#8217;s built in, I don&#8217;t do any SEO. But regardless what Google suggests, the results on the front page are all me.</p>
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		<title>By: Daniel</title>
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		<dc:creator>Daniel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Apr 2010 22:30:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great points, Keith. I&#039;ll add that Google recently announced that load time will now become part of the algorithm. Popularity is also part of the algorithm. Good journalism leads to loyal readers. Loyal readers are good customers. It&#039;s a simple formula.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great points, Keith. I&#8217;ll add that Google recently announced that load time will now become part of the algorithm. Popularity is also part of the algorithm. Good journalism leads to loyal readers. Loyal readers are good customers. It&#8217;s a simple formula.</p>
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